Opic Exam Practicing) July 26th. 2024.

오픽 시험 대비 연습 24.07.26

 

Q) Hello! Are you ready to start your OPIC test? Please tell me about your favorite hobby.

(안녕하세요. 오픽 시험을 치를 준비가 되었나요? 제일 좋아하는 취미를 말해주세요)

 

A) Hello, nice to meet you. Playing golf is my favorite hobby with my wife. It is very helpful to improve our health care. 

    So we often go to the golf game together.

    (안녕하세요. 반갑습니다. 와이프랑 골프치는 것을 제일 좋아합니다. 골프는 건강에도 좋아서 같이 치고 있습니다.) 

Hello, nice to meet you. Playing golf with my wife is my favorite hobby. It is very helpful for our health, so we often play golf together.

문장 구조를 조금 더 자연스럽게 바꾸고, "health care" 대신 "health"로 간단하게 표현했어요. "go to the golf game" 대신 "play golf"가 더 일반적이에요.

 

Q) Nice to meet you too! Golf is a great hobby. How long have you been playing golf with your wife?

 

A) I have been playing golf for 7 years, but my wife has been playing golf just 1 month.

 

I have been playing golf for 7 years, but my wife has only been playing for 1 month.

"only"를 추가해서 "just" 대신 사용하면 더 자연스러워요. 그리고 "playing" 뒤에 "golf"를 반복하지 않아도 문장이 더 간결해져요.

 

Q) That's great! It must be fun to teach her. What does she enjoy most about golf so far?

 

A) She feels golf is a very complicated sport, but she is interested in how to play golf. And she is practicing how to swing wit the golf club.

 

She feels golf is very complicated, but she's interested in learning how to play. She's practicing her swing with the golf club.

더 자연스럽게 들리도록 문장을 다듬었고, 반복되는 단어를 줄여서 매끄럽게 만들었어요. "is interested in learning how to play"와 "practicing her swing"는 더 간결하게 표현한 거예요.

 

Q) It's good that she's interested! How do you help her improve her swing? Do you give her tips?

 

A) Yes, I advised a lot of tips to her to improve her swing, but she didn't get my advice, so we struggled in that.

 

Yes, I gave her a lot of tips to improve her swing, but she didn't take my advice, so we struggled with that.

“advised” 대신 “gave”를 사용하면 더 자연스러워요. 그리고 “get” 대신 “take”를 쓰는 게 더 맞아요. 마지막으로 “struggled with that”이 더 정확한 표현이에요.

 

Q) That can be challenging! Maybe you can watch some videos together. Have you tried that?

 

A) Yeah. There are a lot of video clip on YouTube so I sent those kind of videos to her but she she have not watched them so we were fight again

Yeah, there are a lot of video clips on YouTube, so I sent her those videos, but she hasn't watched them, so we fought again.

더 자연스럽게 들리도록 시제를 현재 완료형으로 바꿔주고, "video clip"을 복수형으로 고쳤어요. "fight"는 과거형 "fought"로 바꿔서 문장이 완성되었어요.

 

Q) I'm sorry to hear that! It's normal to have some disagreements. How do you usually solve your problems after a fight?

 

A) It is easy to solve that kind of problem because we fell in love with each other and we are loving now each other. So, if the end of classes we feel very comfortable, we forgot all of struggle, our struggle.

It's easy to solve our problems because we love each other. So, by the end of the day, we feel very comfortable and forget all of our struggles.

더 자연스럽게 들리고 불필요한 반복을 줄였어요. 또, 현재 진행형보다는 현재형을 써서 더 명확하게 표현했어요.

 

Q) That’s wonderful to hear! Love makes a big difference. What other activities do you both enjoy together besides golf?

 

A) We also enjoy hiking in the mountain. Hiking is the best way to improve our health too. So we have hiked near my house every weekend.

We also enjoy hiking in the mountains. Hiking is a great way to improve our health too. So we hike near my house every weekend.

“the mountain”보다 “the mountains”가 자연스러워요. “have hiked”는 과거형이니까 “hike”로 바꿔야 매주 하는 습관을 나타낼 수 있어요.

 

Q) Hiking is a great activity! What is your favorite hiking trail near your house? What do you like about it?

 

A) Seobong Mountain is the best course we have been together. The mountain height is so normal so we can climb to the mountain on top to feel free.

Seobong Mountain is our favorite trail. The height is moderate, so we can easily climb to the top and feel free.

"best course we have been together" 대신 "our favorite trail"이 더 자연스럽고 간결해요. 그리고 "height is so normal"보다 "height is moderate"가 더 정확한 표현이에요. "on top to feel free"는 "climb to the top and feel free"로 수정해서 더 이해하기 쉽게 만들었어요.

 

Q) Seobong Mountain sounds beautiful! Do you often see interesting views or wildlife when you hike there?

 

A) Unfortunately, Seogwipo's view is not good. But the forest, Seogwipo's forest, moose, moose are pretty good. So, we enjoy the fresh air in that forest. 

Unfortunately, the view in Seogwipo is not good. But the forest in Seogwipo is nice, and we often see moose. We enjoy the fresh air in the forest.

더 자연스럽고 문법적으로 맞는 표현을 사용했어요. 그리고 "moose"를 언급할 때 반복하지 않아도 됩니다.

 

Q) Fresh air is so refreshing! It sounds like a nice place to relax. Do you take any snacks or drinks with you when you  hike?

 

A) Seolbong Mountain is not highest mountain, so we take only one bottle of water. It's enough to climb on top.

 

Seolbong Mountain is not very high, so we only take one bottle of water. It's enough to reach the top.

"highest" 대신 "high"를 사용하여 산의 높이를 묘사할 때 더 자연스러워요. 그리고 "climb on top"보다 "reach the top"이 더 정확한 표현이에요.

 

Q) That makes sense! Staying hydrated is important. Do you plan to try climbing higher mountains in the future?

 

A)  Yeah, of course. If my wife's health is more increased, we will visit the highest mountain in Korea, which the name is 

Halla Mountain in Jeju Island. We will go to the top of the mountain together.

Yeah, of course. If my wife's health improves, we will visit the highest mountain in Korea, Halla Mountain on Jeju Island. We will go to the top together.

“health is more increased” 대신 “health improves”가 더 자연스럽고, “which the name is” 대신 “Halla Mountain on Jeju Island”가 더 깔끔해요. 그리고 “the top of the mountain together” 대신 “the top together”가 더 간결해요.

 

Q) That sounds like an exciting goal! Halla Mountain is beautiful. Have you researched what you need to prepare for that hike?

 

A) Yeah, I researched already all kinds of them. Enough bottles of water and some kinds of energy chocolate bar will be needed.

Yes, I already researched everything. We'll need enough bottles of water and some energy chocolate bars.

문장을 더 자연스럽게 만들고, "all kinds of them" 대신에 "everything"을 사용하면 더 명확해요. "Some kinds of" 대신에 "some"이라고 말하는 게 더 간결하고 이해하기 쉬워요.

 

Q) Good preparation! Energy bars are a great choice. Do you have any other favorite snacks for hiking?

 

A) No, I don't like eating something when I hiked.

No, I don't like eating anything when I hike.

과거형(hiked) 대신 현재형(hike)을 사용해서 더 자연스럽게 만들었고, “something”보다 “anything”이 부정문에 더 어울려요.

 

Q) That’s fine! Enjoying the nature is enough. Do you take photos while hiking to remember your adventures?

 

A) Yeah there are the stone top stone what did I say exactly I don't know well but there are top stone which root is written

the mountains name is on the top of the mountain so we used to take photo with the top stone that's a very memorable thing we have reached on the top of the mountain

Yes, there is a stone at the top of the mountain with the mountain's name written on it. We always take a photo with that stone when we reach the top. It's a very memorable thing for us.

문장을 나누어 더 이해하기 쉽게 만들었고, "the stone at the top of the mountain"처럼 더 명확하게 표현했어요. "we used to take photo" 대신 "we always take a photo"로 현재의 습관을 나타냈어요.

 

Q) That sounds like a special memory! Taking photos with the top stone is a great idea. Do you share those photos with friends or family?

 

A) yeah I posted my Instagram there are a lot of friends in my Instagram so when I reach the top of the mountains all they always know about that

Yeah, I post on my Instagram. I have a lot of friends there, so when I reach the top of the mountain, they always know about it.

더 자연스럽게 들리게 하기 위해 몇 개의 짧은 문장으로 나눴고, "Instagram"에 "my" 대신 "on"을 사용해서 더 정확하게 표현했어요.

 

Q) That's awesome! Sharing your experiences is fun. Thank you for sharing about your hobbies today! Goodbye and good luck!

 

A) Hey, don't go before you say my English level, speaking level. Please notice me, my English speaking level 1 to 10.

Hey, don't go before you tell me my English speaking level. Please let me know my English speaking level from 1 to 10.

말할 때 더 자연스럽게 들리도록 문장을 수정했어요. “notice me” 대신 “let me know”가 더 적절해요. 그리고 "my English speaking level from 1 to 10" 부분을 추가해서 더 명확하게 했어요.

 

Q) I understand! Based on our conversation, I would say your English level is around 5 out of 10. Keep practicing! Goodbye!